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회원님의 영작문

Please answer the question:
Why is it important to learn business terms/business words?


Many people has various purposes of learning English.
Among them, good at English skills is a big advantage who English is not their native language in their country.
Because, many companies and businessmen, they look for overseas markets these days.
So, connect or have a meeting with foreigners, we need to English skills and also business terms.
And, for other reasons, there are also a lot of English business terms used in South Korea companies.
Instead, it has changed to be easier for Koreans to pronounce.
Anyway, no matter what company we enter, I think we have to learn business term these days.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Please answer the question:
Why is it important to learn business terms/business words?



Many people has various purposes of learning English.
>> Many people have various purposes of learning English.
OR >> Many people have various reasons for studying English.
Among them, good at English skills is a big advantage who English is not their native language in their country.
>> Among them, being good at English is a big advantage when English is not even a native language in their country.
OR >> >> Among them, having a good English skill is a big advantage when English is not even a native language in their country.
Because, many companies and businessmen, they look for overseas markets these days.
>> CORRECT!
So, connect or have a meeting with foreigners, we need to English skills and also business terms.
>> So, to connect or to have a meeting with foreigners, we need English skills and business terms.
And, for other reasons, there are also a lot of English business terms used in South Korea companies.
>> And, for other reasons, there are also a lot of English business terms used in South Korean companies.
Instead, it has changed to be easier for Koreans to pronounce.
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, no matter what company we enter, I think we have to learn business terms these days.
>> CORRECT!

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