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What do you enjoy about meeting new people?

I think that to enjoy alot of things.
we will learn new things through them.
For example, their's culture, thought, language, food and custom.
We can do new challenge through experience
Of their. And we can do to develoment through
it. Andthen, we will talk about various life.
Because of variety nature's people.

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Thank you for this Sir Ko!

I think that to enjoy alot of things.
>>>  I think that  we enjoy a lot of things.
We will learn new things through them.
>>> correct  
For example, their's culture, thought, language, food and custom.
>>>  For example, their culture, thoughts, language, food and custom.
We can do new challenge through experience 
Of their. And we can do to develoment through it. 
>>>  We can do new challenges through their experiences and we can have development through it.
Andthen, we will talk about various life. Because of variety nature's people.
>>> Moreover, we will talk about various lives because of variety in nature among people.
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