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How are you going to define love?

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Many people define love in a different sentence.
Looking back, I also think I defined it differently depending on the age.
When I was a teenager, I watched a lot of confession scenes or love scenes in romantic movies or dramas, so I thought that it was the feeling I felt from a person who fell in love at first sight, or that a cool man confessed to me that he liked only me.
But as I get older, this really isn't common.
When I was university student, there were many men in my major, so I thought I could date a man right away like a campus youth drama.
At that time, I thought that love was something that I could share the same feelings with and share good things with.
Now, I think love is about making my side.
Whether it's a hobby, time, or feeling, it seems to be love to share and comfort each other and create my own side to create a shelther.

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Hello, Yun!
I think when we were young we always thought that things were simple and life was easy. The reality will hit us that it is more than the fantasies we had in our minds... ^^ 
-Chammy
Many people define love in a different sentence.
>>Many people define love in different sentences.
Looking back, I also think I defined it differently depending on the age.
When I was a teenager, I watched a lot of confession scenes or love scenes in romantic movies or dramas, so I thought that it was the feeling I felt from a person who fell in love at first sight, or that a cool man confessed to me that he liked only me.
But as I get older, this really isn't common.
>>Correct
When I was university student, there were many men in my major, so I thought I could date a man right away like a campus youth drama.
>>When I was a university student, there were many men in my major, so I thought I could date a man right away like a campus youth drama.
At that time, I thought that love was something that I could share the same feelings with and share good things with.
Now, I think love is about making my side.
Whether it's a hobby, time, or feeling, it seems to be love to share and comfort each other and create my own side to create a shelter.
>>Correct
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