¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*À±
2024-02-16 3861

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I agree with this quotation because I think that when people succeed then reason, most of it is because of effort.
I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of thier efforts.
Sciencist Edison said, "Genius is made with 99% effort and 1% inspiration."
It means that in order to achieve great results, it takes place in the process of constantly striving while failing a lot.
This is the result of Marin Curie, who discovered radium, also made numerous failures and efforts to discover radium.
Wouldn't there be ridiculous things happening where many people try to catch the intangible nonsense of luck if they succeed only with luck without trying?

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Yun!
Thank you for making the time to do your homework. I hope to hear more of your personal and sincere opinions on the topic. ^^
Chammy
I agree with this quotation because I think that when people succeed then reason, most of it is because of effort.
I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of thier efforts.
>>I think when people are successful, they can have explosive energy if they add the right timing and luck in the middle of their efforts.
Sciencist Edison said, "Genius is made with 99% effort and 1% inspiration."
>>Scientist Edison said, "Genius is made with 99% effort and 1% inspiration."
It means that in order to achieve great results, it takes place in the process of constantly striving while failing a lot.
This is the result of Marin Curie, who discovered radium and also made numerous failures and efforts to discover radium.
Wouldn't there be ridiculous things happening where many people try to catch the intangible nonsense of luck if they succeed only with luck without trying?
>>Correct
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
136852 Homework ±è*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 4
136851 What do you think is the most effective way of advertising... ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2
136850 What are the advantages of having a big family? Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2663
136849 What do you think of the rainy season? How do you feel when it... Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2949
136848 homework 04.30 ÃÖ*Ç ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2773
136847 Choose the correct preposition for the following sentences: 1.... ÃÖ*¼º ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2950
136846 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 1
136845 Why do you think Korean dramas are so popular? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 0
136844 What do you think is the most useful thing in the world? Explain. ¿À*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 0
136843 Fears ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 3150
136842 What are some good things to ask someone you just met? Ȳ*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2328
136841 my school ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 3993
136840 What most worries you about global warming? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 4178
136839 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 3055
136838 HW ³ª*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 3062
136837 How good are you at playing sports? How could you be better? ¿À*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2764
136836 Homework- I really appreciate it. À±*¼± ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 3854
136835 place ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 1
136834 What other English words with the short or lax vowel sound [ih]... ¹Ú*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2765
136833 What things are there to look forward to about old age? À±*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-04-30 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04