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How do you solve conflicts in working with others?

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2024-02-19 2752

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If I have a problem with colleagues, I try to have a conversation with them first, and listen to their side to understand their opinion and find a compromise.
I had that experience when I was working in cafe before.
The conflict was from different working style, our workplace always busy and have long queue. I thought serving menu with perfection and fast was important, and on the other hand, my co-worker was focused on conversation with customer.
There is no right and wrong on our working style, but we have conflict with each other's working style.
I tried to start conversation with her and explain each other's side, we both understand each other and sometimes follow other working style since that conversation.

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Hello there,  Rachel!

I believe you when you say that you can solve differences through professional communication. We come from different cultural backgrounds and practices with our colleagues and an open communication can alleviate to disputes and misunderstandings.

As you can see below, your sentences have very minor suggestions in grammar. Study them carefully and incorporate them in your next composition. Generally, your sentence compositions are very good and professional level. Keep up the great work!

See you in class again.

-T. Donna~

If I have a problem with colleagues, I try to have a conversation with them first, and listen to their side to understand their opinion and find a compromise.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

I had that experience when I was working in cafe before.
>> I had that experience when I was working in a cafe before.

The conflict was from different working style, our workplace always busy and have long queue. I thought serving menu with perfection and fast was important, and on the other hand, my co-worker was focused on conversation with customer.
>> The conflict was from different working styles, our workplace is always busy and have long queues. I thought serving menu with perfection and fast was important, but on the other hand, my co-worker was focused on conversation with customers.

There is no right and wrong on our working style, but we have conflict with each other's working style.
>> There is no right or wrong on our working styles, but we have conflicts with each other's working style.

I tried to start conversation with her and explain each other's side, we both understand each other and sometimes follow other working style since that conversation.
>> I tried to start a conversation with her and explained each other's sides, we both understood each other and sometimes follow other working styles since that conversation. Very good sentence!

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