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The benefits of drinking water

1. Drinking enough water is helpful for skin health and is good for preventing constipation.
2. Water carries the food we eat and keeps our body temperature constant.
3. Water is a necessary element when we cook or clean.
4. Water has zero calories, which is better for our body than sugar drinks

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You have indeed enumerated the benefits of water. Well done, Mia! ^^ Thank you for consistently doing your assignments. 
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The benefits of drinking water
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1. Drinking enough water is helpful for skin health and is good for preventing constipation.

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>>  Drinking enough water is helpful for the skin, and it helps prevent constipation.

2. Water carries the food we eat and keeps our body temperature constant.

>> CORRECT

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>> Water aids in carrying the food we eat, and it keeps our body temperature constant.

3. Water is a necessary element when we cook or clean.

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>> Water is necessary when we cook and clean.

4. Water has zero calories, which is better for our body than sugar drinks

>> Water has zero calories, which is better for our body than drinking sugary drinks.


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