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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What fears do you have for the future?


As for me own dream and ambition, I want to live a leisurely life.
When I was student I didn't know that, but now days I think about it, my parent's support is really appreciated and great things.
So in the future, I will help to my parents, family, and around people who helped to me.
Before that, I will have to get a good job or succeed in the my own business in order to do what I want.
But somethings makes me nervous these days it that I don't know what to do, and time doesn't wait for me.
So, these things make me fear.
Nevertheless, I think I need to overcome and endure these anxiety for grow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What fears do you have for the future?



As for me own dream and ambition, I want to live a leisurely life.
>> As for my own dream and ambition, I want to live a convenient life.
When I was student I didn't know that, but now days I think about it, my parent's support is really appreciated and great things.
>> When I was a student I didn't know that, but nowadays I think about it, my parents' support is really appreciated and it's a great thing for me.
So in the future, I will help to my parents, family, and around people who helped to me.
>> So in the future, I will help my parents, family, and the people who helped me.
Before that, I will have to get a good job or succeed in the my own business in order to do what I want.
>> Before that, I should get a good job or succeed in my own business in order to do what I want.
But somethings makes me nervous these days it that I don't know what to do, and time doesn't wait for me.
>> But some things make me nervous these days that I don't know what to do, and time doesn't wait for me.
So, these things make me fear.
>> So, these things make me feel afraid.
Nevertheless, I think I need to overcome and endure these anxiety for grow.
>> Nevertheless, I think I need to overcome and endure this anxiety for it not to grow.

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