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Do you ever worry about the safety of the rides at the amusement parks?

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2024-02-20 2073

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Yes I worry about the saftey rides at the amusement parks.
Like a Rollar coster, Bikings and Zirodrops.
But I always worry about the saftey and scary amusement park rides.
These are do I worry about the saftey amusement parks rides.
Do you ever worry about the saftey amusement parks rides?

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


Yes, I worry about the saftey rides at the amusement parks.
>> Yes, I worry about the saftey rides in the amusement parks.
Like a Rollar coster, Bikings and Zirodrops.
>> Examples are roller coasters, vikings, and gyrodrops. [ PLEASE TAKE NOTE OF THE SPELLINGS OF THE UNDERLINED WORDS.]
But I always worry about the saftey and scary amusement park rides.
>> But I always worry about the saftey of scary amusement park rides.
These are do I worry about the saftey amusement parks rides.
>> These are the things I worry about the saftey amusement park rides.
Do you ever worry about the saftey amusement parks rides?
[YES, I WORRY ABOUT THE SAFETY OF AMUSEMENT PARK RIDES BECAUSE SOME ARE QUITE DANGEROUS AND SCARY. EVEN IF THERE ARE SAFETY BELTS, NO ONE IS SURE IF IT CAN REALLY KEEP YOU SAFE WHILE RIDING THE AMUSEMENT PARK RIDES. ~ T. CAMILLE]
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