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I really want to see that machine.

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I can't remember which movie it was, but there was an invention in one scene where people could wear hats and build a lot of knowledge in their brains.
When the machine is invented, you can look around the world with a wider perspective with a lot of knowledge, and when you want to have the knowledge you want, you can get to know it yourself without any other studies or knowledge.
That's why I want to see such an invention the most.

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Hi Da Hye, 

It sounds like you're intrigued by the idea of a machine that enhances knowledge and perspective. The concept of effortlessly acquiring knowledge is fascinating indeed. Such an invention could revolutionize how we learn and understand the world around us. It's exciting to think about the possibilities it could unlock. Keep nurturing your curiosity and enthusiasm for innovation! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I can't remember which movie it was, but there was an invention in one scene where people could wear hats and build a lot of knowledge in their brains. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I can't recall the movie, but there's a scene featuring an invention where people wear hats to rapidly absorb knowledge into their brains. 

When the machine is invented, you can look around the world with a wider perspective with a lot of knowledge, and when you want to have the knowledge you want, you can get to know it yourself without any other studies or knowledge. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Once the machine is invented, you can gain a broader perspective of the world, enriched with extensive knowledge. Moreover, you can acquire specific knowledge effortlessly, without the need for additional studies or prior knowledge. 

That's why I want to see such an invention the most. 

>>That's the invention I want to see the most. 

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