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I helped someone last year, but it was a very small thing. it was when I traveled to Japan. I went to a tourist attraction. and I saw a glove on the ground. it looked like someone lost. so I picked it up and looked around to find its owner. After a few minutes, I saw a girl who had a glove that looks like the other pair that I found. As expected, she was the owner of the gloves, so she said thank you to me. and I noticed she was korean. At that moment, I felt proud that I found the owner and helped someone who is same nationality in another country.

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Hey Iris! It's amazing how you were able to help someone with this little gesture. I hope you get to help more people in your own ways.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I helped someone last year, but it was a very small thing.
>> Last year, I had the opportunity to lend a helping hand, albeit in a small way.

it was when I traveled to Japan. I went to a tourist attraction. and I saw a glove on the ground.
>> During my travels in Japan, while visiting a popular tourist spot, I noticed a lone glove lying on the ground, seemingly misplaced and abandoned. 

it looked like someone lost. so I picked it up and looked around to find its owner.
>> Instinctively, I picked it up, driven by the desire to reunite it with its rightful owner.

After a few minutes, I saw a girl who had a glove that looks like the other pair that I found.
>> After a brief search, my efforts paid off when I spotted a young girl who happened to be holding the matching glove.

As expected, she was the owner of the gloves, so she said thank you to me. and I noticed she was korean.
>>  As I approached her, it became apparent that she was Korean, just like myself. 

At that moment, I felt proud that I found the owner and helped someone who is same nationality in another country.

>> In that moment, a sense of pride washed over me as I realized I had not only returned a lost item but also extended a helping gesture to someone from my own nationality in a foreign land.




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