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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you usually watch movies at the theater or watch them at home?


In the past, I used to go a movie theater because there were many interesting movies.
And at that time, I preferred to watch movie in the theater.
But these days, I prefer to watch movie at home.
Because, very a few movies had been successful in recent year and most of the rest the movies failed.
And honestly, movies and dramas from OTT media services like a Netflix are more fun these days.
In addition, if we wait a few month, we can be watch a theater's movie at home.
So, these days if I don't have a free movie ticket, I don't well go to the theater.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you usually watch movies at the theater or watch them at home?



In the past, I used to go a movie theater because there were many interesting movies.
>> In the past, I used to go to a movie theater because there were many interesting movies.
And at that time, I preferred to watch movie in the theater.
>> And at that time, I preferred to watch movies in the theater.
But these days, I prefer to watch movies at home.
>> CORRECT!
Because, very a few movies had been successful in recent year and most of the rest the movies failed.
>> Because, only a few movies had been successful in the recent years and the rest the movies have failed.
And honestly, movies and dramas from OTT media services like Netflix are more fun these days.
>> CORRECT!
In addition, if we wait a few month, we can be watch a theater's movie at home.
>> In addition, if we wait for a few months, we can watch a theater's movie at home.
So, these days if I don't have a free movie ticket, I don't well go to the theater.
>> So, these days if I don't have a free movie ticket, I don't go to the theater.

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