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Yun, you demonstrated incredible bravery!
Whatever you overcome, to me, demonstrates how brave you are... Doing things that do not interest you or that you are unfamiliar with can be part of it. And I hope we will always choose to face and overcome fears rather than keep them within us. ^_____^

Chammy

There seem to be three bravest moments.

First, I think it was about going into the gost house of the amusement park.

>>First, I think it was about going into the ghost house of the amusement park.

Actually, I don't like scary everythings.

>>Actually, I don't like everything scary

But I don't know what I was thinking, but I wanted to go into the gost house and led my dad, who hates it, into the gost house.

>> But I don't know what I was thinking, but I wanted to go into the ghost house and led my dad, who hates it, too.

Contrary to my thinking, I immediately dropped down to the ground and cried as soon as I entered, and my dad dragged me out in an angry state.

>>Correct

In back again thinking, it was a funny situation, but think it was a moment when I acted bravely.

>> Looking back again, I think it was a funny situation, but it was a moment when I acted bravely.

Second, it was about when I took a year off from my university.

At that time, taking a break from university became a trend, so my friends around me were resting.

>>Correct

I gave a presentation about my a year plan to my parents who ould be worried after thinking for a long time without getting caught up in the trend.

>>I gave a presentation about my year plan to my parents who could be worried after thinking for a long time without getting caught up in the trend.

Thanks to that, I was able to take a leave of absence with the consent of my parents.

Finally, it's all my moments to be brave in the future.

I think I'm getting braver as I get older.

So, I think my bravest moment will change in the future.

Isn't it a brave act to learn English right now by speaking Power English?

>>Correct

In the future, it will do brave to apply for a job without many worrying boldly.

>>In the future, it will be brave to apply for a job without much fear.


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