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작성자: 임*진
2024-03-05 2067

회원님의 영작문

In fact, I believe that the things I can effectively affect my friends are in the recruiting season to overcome blurriness and fear of failure.
I have given them a lot of advices until now since I started career earlier than other peer.
I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and draw expected questions of interviews for them.
Additionally, because I already had experienced the change of job, I have conveyed some tips related to the way of resignment.
Like this, if my friends ask for supports that I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
I also have gotten many benefits from my friends unconsciously.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ms. Yu Jin! Impressive commitment to supporting friends in their careers! Your proactive approach in sharing advice and experiences is commendable. It's great to see a mutually beneficial friendship and willingness to help without expecting anything in return.
~T. Jenna

In fact, I believe that the things I can effectively affect my friends are in the recruiting season to overcome blurriness and fear of failure.
>>In fact, I believe that the things I can effectively influence among my friends occur during the recruiting season, helping them overcome blurriness and the fear of failure.
I have given them a lot of advices until now since I started career earlier than other peer.
>>I have given them a lot of advice until now since I started my career earlier than my other peers.
I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and draw expected questions of interviews for them.
>>I actually revised a letter of self-introduction and drew expected questions for interviews for them.
Additionally, because I already had experienced the change of job, I have conveyed some tips related to the way of resignment.
>>Additionally, because I have already experienced a job change, I have conveyed some tips related to the process of resignation.
Like this, if my friends ask for supports that I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
>>Like this, if my friends ask for support and I know the way, I would help them without any rewards.
OR
>>If my friends ask for support and I know the way, I would help them without expecting anything in return.
I also have gotten many benefits from my friends unconsciously.
Correct, or
>>I have also unconsciously gained many benefits from my friends.
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