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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you trust online reviews when making a purchase? Why or why not?

Before purchase something, going to a restaurant, or visiting a place, it's essential to check the reviews.
And, including myself these days people sensitive to review.
So, the reviews play an important role these days.
But, often some reviewer who leave fake reviews.
Or there are owners who buy reviews.
This is because the more reviews, the more trust consumer have.
In addition, in the past, it was easy to distinguish fake reviews, but these days it's not easy.
A few years ago, a well-known online teacher(instructor) in South Korea was arrested by the police.
Because, he was cursing and manipulating other to competitor teacher leave the reviews.
Actually, these incidents countless times.
But, there is no replacement for the review system.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you trust online reviews when making a purchase? Why or why not?


Before purchase something, going to a restaurant, or visiting a place, it's essential to check the reviews.
>> Before purchasing something, going to a restaurant, or visiting a place, it's essential to check the reviews.
And, including myself these days people sensitive to review.
>> People, including me, are sensitive to reviews.
So, the reviews play an important role these days.
>> CORRECT!
But, often some reviewer who leave fake reviews.
>> But, often times, some reviewers leave fake reviews.
Or, there are owners who buy reviews.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Some owners even pay for reviews.
This is because the more reviews, the more trust consumer have.
>> This is because the more reviews you have, the more consumers/customers you gain.
In addition, in the past, it was easy to distinguish fake reviews, but these days it's not easy.
>> CORRECT!
A few years ago, a well-known online teacher(instructor) in South Korea was arrested by the police.
>> CORRECT!
Because, he was cursing and manipulating other to competitor teacher leave the reviews.
>> Because, he was cursing and manipulating others to leave reviews against his competitor.
Actually, these incidents countless times.
>> Actually, these incidents happen countless of times.
But, there is no replacement for the review system.
>> CORRECT!

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