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What do you think is the biggest challenge/struggle about living in another country?
I think that the biggest challenge or struggle about living in another country have a lot of various problem.
Let me talk about 2 cases.
First case is about the challenge.and second cases is about the struggle.

First case have a lot of problem. The problems are about to learn the other language, to learn
The other culture.
Second cases same. To have their's food, to have
Feel their's weather.to have feel their's lifestyle.

But, the important is my mind.
It is important to try to change my self.

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Thank you for this Sir Ko!

I think that the biggest challenge or struggle about living in another country have a lot of various problem.
>> I think that there are various kinds of big challenges and struggles about living in another country. 
Let me talk about 2 cases.
>>  correct
First case is about the challenge.and second cases is about the struggle.
>> The first case is about the challenge and the second case is about the struggle. 
First case have a lot of problem. 
>>  The first case is a big problem.
The problems are about to learn the other language, to learn The other culture.
>>  The problems are about learning the other language and to learn another country's culture.
Second cases same. To have their's food, to have Feel their's weather.to have feel their's lifestyle.
>> THe second case is the same, to try their food, to experience their weather and to have their lifestyle.  
But, the important is my mind.  
>>  But, the important thing is what's in my mind.
It is important to try to change myself.
>>  correct  
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