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Some people believe that people living in the twenty-first century have a better standard of living as compared to previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I don't know. But i disagree this statement. Because of economical increasing.
In twenty century of korea is richer than this century. After 1997, we lost our economical free in IMF.
In Actually, economy increasing rate is down after 2000.
We escape from economic collapse, per capital income are slow down before years.
So i think that we don't live well than other years.

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Hi there Lee! Thank you for being so expressive of  your opinions. I see that you always try your best in everything you do! Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don't know. 
OR>>> I don't have any ideas.  
But i disagree this statement. 
>>> But I disagree with this statement. 
Because of economical increasing.
>>> Because of economic inflation.
In twenty century of korea is richer than this century. 
>>> In the twentieth century, Korea used to be richer than this century. 
After 1997, we lost our economical free in IMF.
>>> After 1997, we were free from IMF.
In Actually, economy increasing rate is down after 2000.
>>> Actually, since 2000, the economy's growth rate has decreased.
We escape from economic collapse, per capital income are slow down before years.
>>> We have escaped economic collapse, and per capita income has been declining for years.
So i think that we don't live well than other years.
>>> Thus, in my opinion, we don't live as well as previous years.
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