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What does it mean to put effort into all we do?

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2024-03-13 2916

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Even putting effort into everyrthing we do seems to mean effort.
Originally, everything invloves a lot of effort.
I don't work to show someone, but I think it also means showing how much time I invested and included my passion.
Also, some people seems to show diligence.
Because trying shows more industrious than others.
It may show that others are struggling this much.
Perhaps you may try harder because you are struggling with a difficult problem.

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Greetings, Yun!
I appreciate how you always answer questions, and I hope you are writing a more genuine response. I also like the part where you said that whatever we put into what we do means effort, and I agree since we still committed time and energy. Thank you so much for it:)
Chammy 
Even putting effort into everyrthing we do seems to mean effort.
>> Even putting effort into everything we do seems to mean effort.
OR
>>Even putting a little work into everything we do appears to imply effort
Originally, everything invloves a lot of effort.
>>Originally, everything involved a lot of effort
I don't work to show someone, but I think it also means showing how much time I invested and included my passion.
>>Correct
Also, some people seems to show diligence.
>>Also, some people seem to show diligence.
Because trying shows more industrious than others.
It may show that others are struggling this much.
Perhaps you may try harder because you are struggling with a difficult problem.
OR
>>Because trying demonstrates greater diligence than others.
It might demonstrate how many difficulties others are experiencing.
Maybe you are facing a difficult problem, so you might try harder.
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