¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What does it mean to put effort into all we do?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*À±
2024-03-13 3061

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Even putting effort into everyrthing we do seems to mean effort.
Originally, everything invloves a lot of effort.
I don't work to show someone, but I think it also means showing how much time I invested and included my passion.
Also, some people seems to show diligence.
Because trying shows more industrious than others.
It may show that others are struggling this much.
Perhaps you may try harder because you are struggling with a difficult problem.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Greetings, Yun!
I appreciate how you always answer questions, and I hope you are writing a more genuine response. I also like the part where you said that whatever we put into what we do means effort, and I agree since we still committed time and energy. Thank you so much for it:)
Chammy 
Even putting effort into everyrthing we do seems to mean effort.
>> Even putting effort into everything we do seems to mean effort.
OR
>>Even putting a little work into everything we do appears to imply effort
Originally, everything invloves a lot of effort.
>>Originally, everything involved a lot of effort
I don't work to show someone, but I think it also means showing how much time I invested and included my passion.
>>Correct
Also, some people seems to show diligence.
>>Also, some people seem to show diligence.
Because trying shows more industrious than others.
It may show that others are struggling this much.
Perhaps you may try harder because you are struggling with a difficult problem.
OR
>>Because trying demonstrates greater diligence than others.
It might demonstrate how many difficulties others are experiencing.
Maybe you are facing a difficult problem, so you might try harder.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
142269 Is there a difference in the way Koreans celebrate the Korean... Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 907
142268 The best part of being a pediatrician ±è*·É ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 3
142267 Homework ÀÌ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 1122
142266 new year ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 0
142265 elephant ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 0
142264 Niaragara ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 0
142263 why ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 945
142262 Talk about your most unforgettable vacation. ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 1540
142261 2/3 Homework ±Ç*ºó ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 1
142260 Do you prefer talking on the phone or messaging? Why? Áø*È£ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 1
142259 What¡¯s something that always bothers you, no matter how hard... ÀÓ*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 1129
142258 What do you understand with \"revenge shopping\"? What form of... ÀÌ*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 1061
142257 younger generations should~ continue old traditions vs create... ±Ç*Áø ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 2
142256 What¡¯s the most adorable or funny thing your late cat has ever... ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2025-02-04 2
142255 Homework ¿À*º½ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-03 0
142254 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-03 1
142253 Homework & Question ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-03 1035
142252 What was the hardest favor that someone asked you? ÀÓ*ºñ ¿Ï·á 2025-02-03 1502
142251 What is your ideal workplace? ÀÌ*À± ¿Ï·á 2025-02-03 1335
142250 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2025-02-03 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04