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To what extent do you agree or disagree that gamers gain confidence in their mind and skill through

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회원님의 영작문

I think a game can let a gamer get confidence, problem-solving skills and compliments in cyber-world through completing a series of tough missions. A gamer can be satisfied with good things above to live confidently and happily. A gamer can enjoy such affirmative estimation from gamers on web, which he hasn’t experienced in real life. That may mean that playing video games can be a good starting point to restart a life. In this regard, I hope that more game developers will get interested and involved to make such a game with many beneficial factors or developers can work with educators to make more educational and interesting games.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Mr. Steve! Fantastic exploration of the positive impacts of gaming! Your composition eloquently articulates how video games can enhance confidence, problem-solving abilities, and provide affirmation. Keep up the excellent work!
~Jenna

I think a game can let a gamer get confidence, problem-solving skills and compliments in cyber-world through completing a series of tough missions.
Correct, or
>>I believe that a game has the power to instill confidence, enhance problem-solving skills, and elicit compliments within the cyber-world through the completion of challenging missions.
A gamer can be satisfied with good things above to live confidently and happily. 
>> A gamer can be satisfied with the good things mentioned above to live confidently and happily. 
OR
>>Gamers can derive immense satisfaction from these positive experiences, empowering them to lead a life filled with confidence and happiness.
A gamer can enjoy such affirmative estimation from gamers on web, which he hasn’t experienced in real life. 
>>A gamer can enjoy such affirmative estimation/feedback from gamers on the web, which he hasn’t experienced in real life. 
OR
>> Gamers can find gratification in the positive feedback they receive from fellow gamers online, an experience that may be entirely new to them in comparison to real-life interactions.
That may mean that playing video games can be a good starting point to restart a life. 
Correct, or
>>This implies that engaging in video games could represent a constructive first step towards revitalizing one's life.
In this regard, I hope that more game developers will get interested and involved to make such a game with many beneficial factors or developers can work with educators to make more educational and interesting games.
>>In this regard, I hope that more game developers will become interested and involved in creating games with numerous beneficial factors, or that developers can collaborate with educators to make/ produce more educational and interesting/engaging games.

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