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Julia paid for her new slippers by credit card.
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My friend saw a car crash yesterday.
Someone stole my car a few years ago.
The audience went quiet when the film began.

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Hello  Seon!!!


I can see you're trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny


Julia paid for her new slippers by credit card.

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The sun shone brightly yesterday.

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My friend saw a car crash yesterday.

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Someone stole my car a few years ago.

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The audience went quiet when the film began.

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