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The perfect Monday for me is to wake up in the morning, eat breakfast or bread, go to work at the office, sit on the bus, get off work, get home, wash up, prepare for English class, have fun, and go to bed after finishing the rest of my detailed schedule.

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Hi Da Hye, 

Your perfect Monday routine sounds wonderfully structured and fulfilling! From starting the day with a good breakfast to ending it with productive activities and English class, you've planned a day that balances work and personal growth. Keep embracing this routine, and may your Mondays always be as productive and satisfying as you envision. 

~Teacher Cathy 


The perfect Monday for me is to wake up in the morning, eat breakfast or bread, go to work at the office, sit on the bus, get off work, get home, wash up, prepare for English class, have fun, and go to bed after finishing the rest of my detailed schedule. 

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OR>>A perfect Monday for me involves waking up in the morning, enjoying breakfast or bread, heading to the office, commuting by bus, working until the end of the day, returning home, freshening up, getting ready for my English class, enjoying the lesson, and finally going to bed after completing the rest of my planned activities. 

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