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What tips would you give someone who is traveling for the first time?

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2024-03-20 3181

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I would like to highly advise two things to people with no travel experience when they go on their first trip.
The first is that they must clearly decide what the purpose of their trip is.
This is because the travel location, travel period, and things to prepare vary depending on whether the purpose of the trip is simple relaxation, visiting famous tourist aqttractions, or making memories with family or friends.
The second thing is that they need to study enough about their travel destination in advance.
I would like to share what a famous Korean archaeologist said.
“You can only see as much as you know.”
Additionally, I would like to introduce the words of Ernst Gombrich, who wrote a book titled Western Art History.
“To properly understand a work of art, you must know the artist’s life.
The more you know in advance about the historical facts, major figures, customs and values ​​related to the destination, the more enjoyable the trip will be.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Sun! 

Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! 

- Kristine ^^ 

I would like to highly advise two things to people with no travel experience when they go on their first trip.
>> There are two things I would strongly suggest they do when someone is traveling for the first time.
The first is that they must clearly decide what the purpose of their trip is.
>> First and foremost, they need to determine exactly why they are traveling.
This is because the travel location, travel period, and things to prepare vary depending on whether the purpose of the trip is simple relaxation, visiting famous tourist aqttractions, or making memories with family or friends.
>> Correct. 
Or >> This is due to the fact that the destination, duration of stay, and necessary preparations differ based on whether the trip is intended for leisure, seeing well-known tourist attractions, or creating lasting memories with loved ones.
The second thing is that they need to study enough about their travel destination in advance.
>> Correct. 
I would like to share what a famous Korean archaeologist said. “You can only see as much as you know.”
>> Correct. 
Additionally, I would like to introduce the words of Ernst Gombrich, who wrote a book titled Western Art History. “To properly understand a work of art, you must know the artist’s life.
>> Correct. 
The more you know in advance about the historical facts, major figures, customs and values ​​related to the destination, the more enjoyable the trip will be.
>> Your journey will be more pleasurable if you are well-informed about the destination's history, notable citizens, customs, and ideals.
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