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The most difficult job for me is one that requires emotional labor. There are many jobs that can be mentally stressed. For example, there are customer service managers, elementary school teachers, and service managers. These jobs seem to be difficult for me in that I have to hide my feelings sometimes while maintaining a professional attitude.

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You've justified your answer, Mia. Very good! ^^ I believe that maintaining a professional attitude is really hard work and a talent, as we encounter many challenges that can stir our emotions at work. 
-Khai

The most difficult job for me is one that requires emotional labor. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> A job that requires emotional labor is the most difficult job for me.

There are many jobs that can be mentally stressed. 

>> There are many jobs that can be mentally stressful.

For example, there are customer service managers, elementary school teachers, and service managers. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> To name a few, these are customer service managers, elementary school teachers, and service managers. 

These jobs seem to be difficult for me in that I have to hide my feelings sometimes while maintaining a professional attitude.

>> These jobs seem to be difficult for me because I have to hide my feelings sometimes while maintaining a professional attitude.


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