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What do you think are the reasons why people want to be polygamous?

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2024-03-23 2833

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Why didn't you complete homework's question. By the way, I personally think everyone has own endless greed. Especially, the polygamy is a part of greed in humanity. And, I believe the polygamy is a symbol about wealth and power. All men tend to dream it although it is illegal depending on the country. Also, that's the reason why people get divorced. Of course, there are lots of other reasons like different personality, not taking a risk, etc. But, if they don't accept their fiancé, it will happen. We have only three classes left. Even if I don't extend it, we'll keep in touch with. :)

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Why didn't you complete homework's question. 
>> CORRECT!  [What do you mean I didn't? haha.]
By the way, I personally think everyone has own endless greed. 
>> CORRECT! 
Especially, the polygamy is a part of greed in humanity. 
>> CORRECT! 
And, I believe the polygamy is a symbol about wealth and power. 
>> And, I believe the polygamy is a symbol of wealth and power. 
All men tend to dream it although it is illegal depending on the country. 
>> All men tend to dream about  it although it is illegal depending on the country. 
Also, that's the reason why people get divorced. 
>> CORRECT! 
Of course, there are lots of other reasons like different personality, not taking a risk, etc. 
>> CORRECT! 
But, if they don't accept their fiancé, it will happen. 
>> CORRECT! 
We have only three classes left. 
>> CORRECT! 
Even if I don't extend it, we'll keep in touch with. :) [okay! :) ]
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