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The low-carb diet might be a good practice for healthy life.

But in my opinion, ti is not the problem carb itself.

I think that our overeating habits and uncontrolled appetite. are problems.

Carb is not a crime.

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Ms. Lily!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework and providing thoughtful answers to the questions. I enjoy reading homework assignments because they often provide personal insights that are not found in the textbook. Your effort and attention to detail are greatly appreciated. Thank you again!
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The low-carb diet might be a good practice for healthy life.
>>> A low-carb diet might be a good practice for a healthy life.

But in my opinion, it is not the problem carbs itself.
>>> CORRECT!

I think that our overeating habits and uncontrolled appetite. are problems.
>>> CORRECT!

Carb is not a crime.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Carb is not the culprit.

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