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In my village, there are various community centers depending on the purposes. First, regular local community centers deal with the issues relating to administration of the local citizens such as issuing various documents or permits. They have some programs for citizens and run libraries. Cutral community centers provide various programs and activities. They have various clubs for the citizens. Senior community center serves as a school for senior citizens. Those who are over sixty can use its programs. Multicultural community center also provides various programs for immigrants such as teaching Korean.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
It's nice to know that there are various community centers in the Seoul area. It's quite new for me to learn that people in cities are interested in such activities. Most of the time, people in cities are too busy with work and don't have time for other activities. So, it's great that the government and Korean citizens give importance to these community centers.
- T. Caitlyn
In my village, there are various community centers depending on the purposes. 
>> CORRECT
First, regular local community centers deal with the issues relating to administration of the local citizens such as issuing various documents or permits. 
>> First, regular local community centers deal with issues related to the administration of the local citizens, such as issuing various documents or permits.
They have some programs for citizens and run libraries. 
>> CORRECT
Cutral community centers provide various programs and activities. 
>> CORRECT
They have various clubs for the citizens. 
>> CORRECT
Senior community center serves as a school for senior citizens. 
>> The senior community center serves as a school for senior citizens.
Those who are over sixty can use its programs. 
>> CORRECT
Multicultural community center also provides various programs for immigrants such as teaching Korean.
>> The multicultural community center also provides various programs for immigrants, such as teaching Korean
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