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What is one valuable lesson you have learned from your mother?

작성자: 박*호
2024-04-11 1999

회원님의 영작문

I really love and respect my mother.
Like other korean women of her age, my mother's only formal education was that she attended elementary school and then dropped out.
Nevertheless, my mother was a very bright, wise, and full of life wisdom.
Before I entered elementary school, I learned korean language, "Hangul" and how to count numbers from my mother.
My mother is the eldest of eight siblings, and even to this day, she has such leadership that she takes care of all the birthdays and good and sad things of her brothers and sisters as well as their children.
Additionally, my mother persevered, sacrificed herself, and showed infinite dedication for her family.
Above all, my mother is an optimistic person.
Although she has experienced many difficulties, she has gained the strength to overcome them from her positive mindset.
From my mother, I learned dedication to family, patience, and leadership, but most of all, I am most grateful for learning a positive and optimistic personality.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Sun! 

The importance of a mother can hardly be overstated. Mothers are often the primary caregivers, providing not only physical nourishment and shelter but also emotional support and guidance.

- Kristine ^^

I really love and respect my mother.
>> Correct.
Like other korean women of her age, my mother's only formal education was that she attended elementary school and then dropped out.
>> Like other Korean women of her age, my mother's only formal education was attending elementary school before dropping out.
Nevertheless, my mother was a very bright, wise, and full of life wisdom.
>> Nevertheless, my mother was very bright, wise, and full of life wisdom.
Before I entered elementary school, I learned korean language, "Hangul" and how to count numbers from my mother.
>> Before I entered elementary school, my mother taught me the Korean language, 'Hangul,' and how to count numbers.
My mother is the eldest of eight siblings, and even to this day, she has such leadership that she takes care of all the birthdays and good and sad things of her brothers and sisters as well as their children.
>> My mother is the eldest of eight siblings, and even to this day, she continues to show her leadership by taking care of all the birthdays, joys, and sorrows of her brothers, sisters, as well as their children.
Additionally, my mother persevered, sacrificed herself, and showed infinite dedication for her family.
>> Correct.
Above all, my mother is an optimistic person.
>> Correct.
Or >> Above all, my mother is an optimist.
Although she has experienced many difficulties, she has gained the strength to overcome them from her positive mindset.
>> Despite experiencing many difficulties, she has gained strength from her positive mindset to overcome them.
From my mother, I learned dedication to family, patience, and leadership, but most of all, I am most grateful for learning a positive and optimistic personality.
>> From my mother, I learned dedication to family, patience, and leadership, but above all, I am most grateful for inheriting a positive and optimistic personality.
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