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Regular sleep is essential.
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Good job on these sentences.
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Regular sleep is essential.
>> CORRECT!

Student like that class because the class is not academic class
>> Students like that class because it is not an academic class.

Some students get stress about their performanc.
>> Some students get stressed about their performance.

The extracurricular class is loved by student.
>> The extracurricular class is loved by students.
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