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Some politicians who failed this election will resign.

People also are divided according to polirical opinion and blame ro each other.

I don't trust politians who don't have morality and leadership.

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Ms. Lily!
In Politics, we feel disappointed if the people we hope to win don't. As citizens, What would be the right thing to do?
One of the hardest questions that we can ever answer since we don't have power and influence.
Talk to you later.
Aki~ 

Some politicians who failed this election will resign.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Some politicians who have lost the election may step down.

People also are divided according to polirical opinion and blame ro each other.
>>>  People also are divided according to political opinion and blame to each other.
>>> People are divided based on political opinions and blame each other. 

I don't trust politians who don't have morality and leadership.
>>> I don't trust politicians who don't have morality and leadership.
>>> I do not trust politicians who lack morality and leadership.
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