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People¡¯s voice is genetic.
But the way of speaking can change from environment.
Their parents and its atmosphere affect to their children.
If you want to enhance your speech.
You have to try since childhood.

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Ms. Sunny!
Indeed there are factors affecting how loud or soft our "speaking voice" is. It could be regional, from parents, and also can be acquired.
If you notice some people from Busan, who have lived in Seoul for a long time, they can adapt to the way people talk in Seoul.
But I like your voice, not too loud or soft for me.
T. Aki~


People¡¯s voice is genetic.
>>> CORRECT!

But the way of speaking can change from environment.
>>>  but the way of speaking can be influenced by their environment.

Their parents and its atmosphere affect to their children.
>>> Parents and the atmosphere they create can have a significant impact on their children's speech.

If you want to enhance your speech. You have to try since childhood.
>> If you want to improve your speech, it's important to start practicing from a young age.

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