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Website:Korea the best Website is "NAVER"
browser:Google, Chrome is the most using browser in the world
Dislike:I dislike an egg
The most dangerous: the most dangerous country is Russia
The most famous: I'm the most famous student in my school

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                                    Make a sentence using the following words:


Website: Korea the best Website is "NAVER"
>> "NAVER" is the best website in Korea. 
>> In Korea, the best website is "NAVER".

browser: Google, Chrome is the most using browser in the world
>> Google Chrome is the most used browser in the world. 

Dislike: I dislike an egg.
>> I dislike eggs. 

The most dangerous: the most dangerous country is Russia
>> The most dangerous country is Russia.
>> or: Russia is the most dangerous country. 

The most famous: I'm the most famous student in my school
>>  I'm the most famous student in my school. 

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