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When do you ask for favors?

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In the past, Whenever i go to a travel, I always ask to people, How can i go there?, Where is the bus?
Because i didn't have knowledge about travel.
But these days, Phone has many abilities.
Among them, Searching Enternet ability is the best thing.
I can search on the internet anywhere, I don't need a map and note.
So, When i go to a travel, maybe I will ask to my Phone.
I think Phone is smart better than human.

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Hi, Jun! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
In the past, Whenever i go to a travel, I always ask to people, How can i go there?, Where is the bus?
>> In the past, whenever I traveled, I would always ask people, 'How can I get there?' or 'Where is the bus?'.
Because i didn't have knowledge about travel.
>> I didn't have knowledge about travel.
But these days, Phone has many abilities.
>> These days, phones have many abilities.
Among them, Searching Enternet ability is the best thing.
>> Among them, the ability to search the internet is the best thing.
I can search on the internet anywhere, I don't need a map and note.
>> I can search on the internet anywhere; I don't need a map or notes.
So, When i go to a travel, maybe I will ask to my Phone.
>> So, when I travel, maybe I will ask my phone.
I think Phone is smart better than human.
>> I think phones are smarter than humans.
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