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TikTok and Samsung Lions

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1. What are the latest trends in your country?
>>>People likes TikTok challenge. We especially follow famous IDOL's dance challenge. when I was a big fan of TWICE, if new album is released, I have listened to their all songs in album including non-title tracks. I listened to song "Look at me" at that time. but now days, because of TikTok challenge, this song is revival. It is the lastest TikTok trend song. So I feel so amazed because I listened this song 6 years ago when it was not famous.

2. What¡¯s the latest news?
>>> The baseball team "Samsung lions" is supported by Daegu. And I naturally had been a fan of theirs. But the "Samsung lions" has a bad news at 2016. So I don't have had a interst since 2016. But last saturday, My girlfriend and me went to "Samsung lions park" that is baseball stadim for "Samsung lions". And I felt extremely interested in new line-up of "Samsung lions" that was different with a team I had knew. The lastest news is that lions won last match

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Hello, Brian!
It sounds like you had quite the experience at the Samsung Lions Park! It's fascinating how a change in lineup can reignite interest in a team. Looks like the Lions are back on track with their recent victory!
~ Teacher Maxine

People likes TikTok challenge. We especially follow famous IDOL's dance challenge. 
>> People like TikTok challenges, especially those featuring famous idols' dance challenges.

when I was a big fan of TWICE, if new album is released, I have listened to their all songs in album including non-title tracks. 
>> When I was a big fan of TWICE, whenever a new album was released, I listened to all their songs, including the non-title tracks.

I listened to song "Look at me" at that time. but now days, because of TikTok challenge, this song is revival. 
>> I listened to the song "Look at Me" during that time, but nowadays, because of the TikTok challenge, this song is experiencing a revival.

It is the lastest TikTok trend song. So I feel so amazed because I listened this song 6 years ago when it was not famous.
>> It's the latest TikTok trend song, so I'm amazed because I listened to this song six years ago when it wasn't famous.

The baseball team "Samsung lions" is supported by Daegu. And I naturally had been a fan of theirs. But the "Samsung lions" has a bad news at 2016. So I don't have had a interst since 2016. 
>> The baseball team "Samsung Lions" is supported by Daegu, and I used to be a fan of theirs naturally. However, the "Samsung Lions" had bad news in 2016, so I lost interest.

But last saturday, My girlfriend and me went to "Samsung lions park" that is baseball stadim for "Samsung lions". 
>> But last Saturday, my girlfriend and I went to "Samsung Lions Park," the baseball stadium for the "Samsung Lions."

And I felt extremely interested in new line-up of "Samsung lions" that was different with a team I had knew. 
>> I found myself extremely interested in the new lineup of the "Samsung Lions," which was different from the team I knew.

The lastest news is that lions won last match
>> The latest news is that the Lions won their last match.

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