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I\'ve never met anyone enough to influence decisions and actions.

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I don't put my decision off to anyone.
Also, I think the only person who influences my behavior is my mother who raised my childhood.
Of course, what I need to fix is heard from acquaintances around me and try to fix it if I think it's reasonable.
But I don't think that they have influenced my values.

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Hi Da Hye,

Your words about decision-making show wisdom beyond your years. Trusting your own judgment is a sign of maturity and strength. While considering advice from others, you stay true to your values. This integrity sets you apart. Continue to follow your instincts, Da Hye. Your authenticity is truly inspiring.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don't put my decision off to anyone.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I make my decisions independently.

Also, I think the only person who influences my behavior is my mother who raised my childhood.

>>Also, I think the only person who influenced my behavior is my mother who raised my childhood.

Of course, what I need to fix is heard from acquaintances around me and try to fix it if I think it's reasonable.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Of course, I pay attention to feedback from acquaintances and make changes if I find it reasonable.

But I don't think that they have influenced my values.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, I don't believe that they have had an influence on my values.

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