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I think it is very insignificant for humans to deal with disasters.

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2024-04-24 1798

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Disasters are like natural disasters.
After all, it's not something that humans can do.
Therefore, it is recommended that you prepare carefully.
You may have to think about the sudden loss of water or gas or the inability to go grocery shopping.
Also, it is necessary to check the location of the nearby bomb shelter.
Being thoroughly prepared for safety seems to be the best way to prepare for disasters.

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Dear Da Hye,

Your reflections on handling disasters are quite thoughtful. It's true that natural disasters are beyond human control, but being prepared is within our power. Your advice to carefully prepare for emergencies, such as stocking up on essentials and knowing the location of bomb shelters, is practical and wise. Thank you for emphasizing the importance of safety and preparation. Your proactive approach is commendable.

~Teacher Cathy

 

Disasters are like natural disasters.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Disasters include events like natural disasters.

After all, it's not something that humans can do.

>>After all, it's not something that humans can avoid.

Therefore, it is recommended that you prepare carefully.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, it's a good idea to prepare thoroughly.

You may have to think about the sudden loss of water or gas or the inability to go grocery shopping.

>>CORRECT

OR>>You might need to consider unexpected water or gas shortages, or being unable to go grocery shopping.

Also, it is necessary to check the location of the nearby bomb shelter.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It's also important to know where the nearest bomb shelter is located.

Being thoroughly prepared for safety seems to be the best way to prepare for disasters.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Being completely ready to stay safe seems like the best way to prepare for disasters.

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