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I think that history should be required as a subject. History tells us about how our ancestors lived, about their point of views and more. And sometimes there have been some embarrasing histories of our ancestors and our job is not to hide it, but to lean the mistake from our ancestors and make sure that we don'tt make the same mistake again.

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Hello, Minje!
Absolutely! History isn't just about memorizing dates and events; it's about understanding how our ancestors lived, what shaped their perspectives, and the lessons we can learn from their experiences, both triumphs, and mistakes. 
Good job! ^^
~ Teacher Maxine

I think that history should be required as a subject. 
>> CORRECT

History tells us about how our ancestors lived, about their point of views and more. 
>> History tells us about how our ancestors lived, about their points of view, and more.

And sometimes there have been some embarrasing histories of our ancestors and our job is not to hide it, but to lean the mistake from our ancestors and make sure that we don'tt make the same mistake again.
>> Sometimes, there have been embarrassing histories of our ancestors, and our job is not to hide them but to learn from their mistakes and ensure that we don't repeat them.


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