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The best 3 cities I want to live in Korea.
Best 1 - Jeju Seogwipo City
You can go sea fishing seasonally, and there are many pretty pub cafes. It is also a place where travelers' freedom is overflowing.
Best 2 - Yeosu City
Yeosu City, where camellia blooms and has a camellia island, is a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.
Best 3 - Gangneung City
Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains and seas nearby. Among the cities of Gangwon Province, the infrastructure is well developed. "It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo and Gyeongpo.

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Thank you for sharing these cities, Mia. Very good! You have described them well. 
-Khai

The best 3 cities I want to live in Korea.

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OR

>> Here are the three (3) best cities that I want to live in South Korea.

Best 1 - Jeju Seogwipo City

>> 1. Jeju Seogwipo City

You can go sea fishing seasonally, and there are many pretty pub cafes. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> You can go sea fishing seasonally. There are also many aesthetic pub cafes.

It is also a place where travelers' freedom is overflowing.

>> CORRECT

Best 2 - Yeosu City

>> 2. Yeosu City

Yeosu City, where camellia blooms and has a camellia island, is a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.

>> Yeosu City is the city where camellia blooms. It has a camellia island. It is also a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.

Best 3 - Gangneung City

>> 3. Gangneung City

Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains and seas nearby. 

>> Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains, and seas nearby.

Among the cities of Gangwon Province, the infrastructure is well developed. 

>> CORRECT

"It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo and Gyeongpo.

>> It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo, and Gyeongpo.


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