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Difference between brave and foolhardy

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As we discussed, when we start something, we cannot avoid facing challenges or risks. We need brave to confront challenges. But sometimes just having brave doesn't work. Precise judgment and proper measures are required to address difficult situations. Thus I think it's foolhardy to start or manage a business without any thoughts of and preparations for the possibility of failures.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I totally agree! Bravery or courage is needed when taking risks; however, not having enough preparation is just being foolhardy. We should always weigh things out and study them carefully before taking such risks.
- T. Caitlyn 
As we discussed, when we start something, we cannot avoid facing challenges or risks. 
>> CORRECT 
We need brave to confront challenges. 
>> We need bravery to confront challenges.
But sometimes just having brave doesn't work. 
>> But sometimes, just being brave isn't enough.
Precise judgment and proper measures are required to address difficult situations. 
>> CORRECT
Thus I think it's foolhardy to start or manage a business without any thoughts of and preparations for the possibility of failures.
>> Thus, I think it's foolhardy to start or manage a business without any thoughts and preparations for the possibility of failure.
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