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What is the best age to be and why?

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Oh, I haven't lived long yet, but I'll still think about the answer to your question.
I think 19 or 20 years old is the best.
Nineteen was the age ahead of the university entrance exam, and I had the heaviest weight in my life, but I think it was good because I enjoyed a fun life with good friends in high school.
But if I go back nineteen, I'd like to concentrate more on my studies, HAHA.
I think it's good to be 20 years old because I have a fresh feeling.
Isn't this the first time I'm in my 20s?
Also, since I became an adult for the first time, I experienced a lot of new things.
I went to university, made many people, drank for the first time, and lived in a dormitory away from my parents.
I think I enjoyed everything as a freshman.
Personally, I think 20 years old is the best.
Because there were a lot of happy experiences that I couldn't explain.
But as I have more days to live, won't the best age change depending on what I experience?

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Hello, Yun!
I think the response differs based on our individual life experiences. However, the most frequent response I've received is exactly what you said, in your 20s, it's because you can legally purchase alcoholic beverages. It's strange to hear, but perhaps it's just their curiosity. I hope we live the most every day ^__^
Chammy
Oh, I haven't lived long yet, but I'll still think about the answer to your question.
I think 19 or 20 years old is the best.
Nineteen was the age ahead of the university entrance exam, and I had the heaviest weight in my life, but I think it was good because I enjoyed a fun life with good friends in high school.
But if I go back nineteen, I'd like to concentrate more on my studies, HAHA.
I think it's good to be 20 years old because I have a fresh feeling.
Isn't this the first time I'm in my 20s?
Also, since I became an adult for the first time, I experienced a lot of new things.
>>Correct
I went to university, made many people, drank for the first time, and lived in a dormitory away from my parents.
>>I went to university, met many people, drank for the first time, and lived in a dormitory away from my parents.
I think I enjoyed everything as a freshman.
Personally, I think 20 years old is the best.
Because there were a lot of happy experiences that I couldn't explain.
But as I have more days to live, won't the best age change depending on what I experience?
>>Correct
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