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I don\'t respect anyone.

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I don't respect anyone because I don't care about people.
I think respect is the heart you get from observing someone and in the process.
Therefore, this question seems to be a very difficult question for me.
I don't respect the people of the world, but I'm trying to respect them.
I'm also trying to keep thinking that everyone has something to learn.

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Hi Da Hye, 

I wanted to take a moment to acknowledge the effort you put into completing your homework. Your honesty and willingness to share your thoughts on such a challenging topic are truly commendable. 

It's clear from your writing that you're exploring some deep questions about respect and how it relates to your interactions with others. I appreciate your candidness in expressing your current perspective while also recognizing the importance of trying to change and grow. Keep up the great work Da Hye. 

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don't respect anyone because I don't care about people. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I don't have respect for anyone because I don't care about people. 

I think respect is the heart you get from observing someone and in the process. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I believe that respect is something that grows within you as you observe and interact with someone over time. 

Therefore, this question seems to be a very difficult question for me. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Hence, this question appears to pose a significant challenge for me. 

I don't respect the people of the world, but I'm trying to respect them. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I haven't always respected people universally, but I'm making an effort to do so now. 

I'm also trying to keep thinking that everyone has something to learn. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I'm also striving to maintain the mindset that everyone has something to learn. 

 

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