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Since it was the first game I ever played, Final Fantasy 14 instilled in me a desire to work in the gaming industry. It wasn't just because of my personal experience, but also because Final Fantasy 14, along with World of Warcraft, is one of the most popular and long-lasting MMORPG games. Sustaining popularity and earning trust from users in an online service game is extremely challenging, requiring stable operational abilities and crisis management skills. Therefore, observing Final Fantasy 14, I too aspire to build a reputation for stable service. Additionally, as Square Enix, the company behind Final Fantasy 14, is a foreign company, I was impressed by the recent achievements of NeoWiz among domestic companies. NeoWiz has selected and published excellent games like 'Lies of P' and 'Sannabi', maximizing the value creation of games and achieving good reviews and performance. NeoWiz has provided a foundation for deep consideration of game discovery, promotion, and operational strategie

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Hello, Eugene!
Your response offers a concise blend of personal experience and industry insight. Well done! 
~ Teacher Maxine

Since it was the first game I ever played, Final Fantasy 14 instilled in me a desire to work in the gaming industry. 
>> CORRECT

It wasn't just because of my personal experience, but also because Final Fantasy 14, along with World of Warcraft, is one of the most popular and long-lasting MMORPG games. 
>> CORRECT

Sustaining popularity and earning trust from users in an online service game is extremely challenging, requiring stable operational abilities and crisis management skills. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> Sustaining popularity and building trust in online service games pose significant challenges, demanding stable operational skills and adept crisis management.

Therefore, observing Final Fantasy 14, I too aspire to build a reputation for stable service. 
>> CORRECT
OR >> Thus, by observing Final Fantasy 14, I aim to cultivate a reputation for providing stable service.

Additionally, as Square Enix, the company behind Final Fantasy 14, is a foreign company, I was impressed by the recent achievements of NeoWiz among domestic companies. 
>> CORRECT

NeoWiz has selected and published excellent games like 'Lies of P' and 'Sannabi', maximizing the value creation of games and achieving good reviews and performance. 
>> CORRECT

NeoWiz has provided a foundation for deep consideration of game discovery, promotion, and operational strategie
>> NeoWiz has provided a foundation for deep consideration of game discovery, promotion, and operational strategies.
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