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My closest friend is Harin Kim. We first met when we were college school students. We used to go to travel with another friends. Sometimes we don't understand each other because we have different point of view. That's why we often argue. But she's the only friend who doesn't feel bad if we do that. Because we knows what each other hates and we try not to do. She always being positive. So she encouraging me when i feel negetive.

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Yeon Hee,

Thanks for sharing about your closest friend. It is really nice to have a friend that stays loyal even if you have differences. Nice work! ^^


-Teacher Ash


My closest friend is Harin Kim.

>>CORRECT

 We first met when we were college school students.

>> We first met when we were in college. 

 We used to go to travel with another friends. 

>> We used to travel with other friends.

Sometimes we don't understand each other because we have different point of view.

>> Sometimes, we have misunderstanding because we have different point of views.

That's why we often argue.

>> CORRECT

 But she's the only friend who doesn't feel bad if we do that. 

>> She¡¯s the only friend who doesn¡¯t feel bad when we argue. 

Because we knows what each other hates and we try not to do. 

>> It is because we know each other very well and we try to respect each other's opinion. 

She always being positive. 

>> She is always positive.

So she encouraging me when i feel negetive.

>>She encourages me when I feel down. 


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