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The best advice I would give someone is to be kind to everyone. I think it's best to have no enemies. Yeah I know, it's a mundane thing to say. However, sometimes I have to choose between whom to be kind to. Then, I think it is best to be kind to myself. It is hard to be kind to people with no manner. Therefore, we should keep distance with those people in order to be kind to myself.

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Hello, Jin!
You know, I often tell myself that and others too, because when I'm unhappy, I learn to empathize with other people's emotions. We can only lift their spirits by being kind to them, as we have no idea what they are going through. 
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The best advice I would give someone is to be kind to everyone. I think it's best to have no enemies. Yeah I know, it's a mundane thing to say. However, sometimes I have to choose between whom to be kind to. Then, I think it is best to be kind to myself. It is hard to be kind to people with no manners.
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 Therefore, we should keep distance with those people in order to be kind to myself.
>>Therefore, we should keep our distance from those people in order to be kind to ourselves. 
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