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What can you say about the statement \"It\'s better to give than to receive.\"

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2024-05-10 1974

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I think it can vary from person to person.
But based on my personal personality, I think it's better to give than to receive.
Many Koreans feel sorry and burdened to receive.
Also, when I receive something, I doubt it with the thought, "Isn't there a reason why this person is good to me?"
I think it's better to just give it to them without any worries than to think about so many things.
When it comes to giving, just need the giver's time, money, and sincerity.
But other people think nagatively when it comes to these ideas.
Because more people are using that mind these days, evveryone says, "Don't keep giving something that. You're fool. You're prone to fraud because You're stupid."
But would a person's personality change easily?

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Hello, Yun!~
I occasionally experience it when someone is acting overly close to me. Even while it makes me question, I still value their thoughtful actions. Being a giver rather than a receiver, I think it is preferable to continue receiving without returning the favor. ^__^ Lastly, Let's practice giving without expecting in return.
Chammy
I think it can vary from person to person.
>> Correct
But based on my personal personality, I think it's better to give than to receive.
>>But based on my personality, I think it's better to give than to receive.
Many Koreans feel sorry and burdened to receive.
Also, when I receive something, I doubt it with the thought, "Isn't there a reason why this person is good to me?"
I think it's better to just give it to them without any worries than to think about so many things.
When it comes to giving, just need the giver's time, money, and sincerity.
>> Correct
But other people think nagatively when it comes to these ideas.
>>But other people think negatively when it comes to these ideas.
Because more people are using that mind these days, evveryone says, "Don't keep giving something that. You're fool. You're prone to fraud because You're stupid."
>>Because more people are using that mind these days, everyone says, "Don't keep giving that something. You're a fool. You're prone to fraud because You're stupid."
But would a person's personality change easily?
>> Correct
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