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What is your perception of time now? Does it go by slowly or quickly? What does this depend on?

작성자: 김*환
2024-05-12 2515

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Time passes with equal speed. I feel differently how time goes by. When I was a child, a day was longer than now. Because I could remember everything what happened the day. But now, I can't remeber everything. Thesedays I can't remeber what I ate for lunch. Sometimes my daugther asked me what did I eat for the lunch. I couldn't answer. Some scientists said time goes by how much we can remeber. If you want to make time slow down, you try doing new activites.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!

Good to hear from you. I think time passes differently from when we're happy and sad. I have also read somewhere that “Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted time.” So, as far as you enjoy what you do, it is quality time.

~ Trixia


Content:

Time passes with equal speed.

- CORRECT.

I feel differently how time goes by.

- I feel differently as time goes by.

When I was a child, a day was longer than now.

- When I was a child, a day was longer than it is now.

Because I could remember everything what happened the day.

- I could remember everything that happened that day.

But now, I can't remeber everything.

- But now, I can't remember everything.

Thesedays I can't remeber what I ate for lunch.

- These days, I can't remember what I ate for lunch.

Sometimes my daugther asked me what did I eat for the lunch.

- Sometimes my daughter asks me what I eat for lunch.

I couldn't answer.

- CORRECT.

Some scientists said time goes by how much we can remeber.

- Some scientists said time goes by and how much we can remember.

If you want to make time slow down, you try doing new activites.

- If you want to make time slow down, try doing new activities.

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