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I am interested in my future and I am thinking about it. I am preparing my future seeing many seniors including my mom. Taking care of my health is the most important thing in preparing my future. Except for it, I don't want to know what my future is like. If I knew my future, I would be bored with my life. Unpredictability is an attractive thing.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I agree with you! Knowing the future based on others' experiences can make us more cautious, encouraging us to take preventive measures, especially when discussing illnesses. However, not knowing what the future holds can also motivate us and inspire us to persevere in life and work harder.
- T. Caitlyn 
I am interested in my future and I am thinking about it. 
>> CORRECT
I am preparing my future seeing many seniors including my mom.
>> CORRECT
Taking care of my health is the most important thing in preparing my future. 
>> Taking care of my health is the most important thing in preparing for my future. 
Except for it, I don't want to know what my future is like. 
>> CORRECT
If I knew my future, I would be bored with my life. 
>> CORRECT
Unpredictability is an attractive thing.
>> CORRECT

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