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Do you prefer to eat in the same restaurant or explore new ones?

작성자: 박*호
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When I eat with my family or colleagues near my home or office, I tend to go to restaurants I frequent often.
There are many restaurants I go to, but the one I go to for lunch and the one I go to for dinner are different.
The restaurant I go to at lunch is a place where I can eat light, and the restaurant I go to at dinner is a place where I can have a drink.
And sometimes, I head out to find a new restaurant a little further away.
Koreans go to restaurants that are famous for their delicious food, even if it takes hours to do so.
Likewise, on holidays, I go to new restaurants far from home with my children to change my mood.
When choosing a restaurant, refer to reviews from people who have been to the restaurant.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Sun! 

Thanks for doing your homework today. Many people wish to escape the ordeal of cooking food at home and entertaining people. Moreover, going to a restaurant could mean a respite from cooking that meal. People often include a restaurant trip when they are planning shopping, or movie or an excursion.

- Kristine ^^

When I eat with my family or colleagues near my home or office, I tend to go to restaurants I frequent often.
>> I usually go to restaurants that I visit frequently when I'm dining with my family or colleagues near my house or workplace.
There are many restaurants I go to, but the one I go to for lunch and the one I go to for dinner are different.
>> I typically eat lunch at the same restaurant and dinner at different restaurants.
The restaurant I go to at lunch is a place where I can eat light, and the restaurant I go to at dinner is a place where I can have a drink.
>> I can eat light at the restaurant I go to for lunch, and I can have a drink at the restaurant I go to for dinner.
And sometimes, I head out to find a new restaurant a little further away.
>> Correct.
Koreans go to restaurants that are famous for their delicious food, even if it takes hours to do so.
>> Correct.
Likewise, on holidays, I go to new restaurants far from home with my children to change my mood.
>> Likewise, I take my children to new restaurants that are far from home over the holidays to lift my spirits.
When choosing a restaurant, refer to reviews from people who have been to the restaurant.
>> Online reviews are a useful tool when choosing a restaurant.
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