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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think it is ever okay to do a prank on someone without their consent? Why or why not?

I think the standard of prank is difficult.
Because, a few people laugh the prank, but a few people don't.
So, except for my friends, it's hard to play pranks to others.
Additionally, these days more difficult play joke or prank on someone because their smile and laughter disappears a lot.
It's light joke, but some people easily feel upset and lead on fighting.
Actually, in my opinion, the prank of asking for consent is no prank.
So if I want to play pranks, before the play pranks I should consider to other's pranks level.
And, I never joke on the other's weaknesses and sensitive parts.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think it is ever okay to do a prank on someone without their consent? Why or why not?


I think the standard of pranks is difficult.
>> CORRECT!
Because, a few people laugh the prank, but a few people don't.
>> Because, a few people laugh at the prank, but a few people don't.
So, except for my friends, it's hard to play pranks to others.
>> So, except for my friends, it's hard to play pranks on others.
Additionally, these days more difficult play joke or prank on someone because their smile and laughter disappears a lot.
>> Additionally, these days, it's more difficult to play jokes or pranks on someone because their smile and laughter disappear a lot.
It's light joke, but some people easily feel upset and lead on fighting.
>> It's a light joke, but some people easily feel upset and lead on fights.
Actually, in my opinion, the prank of asking for consent is no prank.
>> Actually, in my opinion, asking for consent to do a prank is no longer a prank.
So if I want to play pranks, before the play pranks I should consider to other's pranks level.
>> So if I want to play pranks, before the play pranks I should consider others' prank level.
And, I never joke on the other's weaknesses and sensitive parts.
>> CORRECT!
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