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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How do you feel about genetically modified vegetables? Would you eat them?

Actually, many people feel uncomfortable about genetically modified vegetables.
But, most of the vegetables and fruits we eat nowadays are genetically modified.
This kinds of vegetable and fruits are we call "GMO".
The reason why they making GMO food are for mass production, good quality, and good taste.
For example, original watermelon has a lot of seeds.
But, through the GMO ways we can easily find non-seeds watermelon in the fruit stores.
Nevertheless, genetically of GMO food are unstable.
It is means, we are not easy to prevent when this foods catch an infectious disease.
Because, the genetically of GMO food are mostly the same.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How do you feel about genetically modified vegetables? Would you eat them?


Actually, many people feel uncomfortable about genetically modified vegetables.
>> CORRECT!
But, most of the vegetables and fruits we eat nowadays are genetically modified.
>> CORRECT!
This kinds of vegetable and fruits are we call "GMO".
>> These kinds of vegetables and fruits are what we call "GMOs".
The reason why they making GMO food are for mass production, good quality, and good taste.
>> The reason why they make GMO food is for mass production, good quality, and good taste.
For example, original watermelon has a lot of seeds.
>> For example, a normal watermelon has a lot of seeds.
But, through the GMO ways we can easily find non-seeds watermelon in the fruit stores.
>> But, through the GMO ways we can easily find seedless watermelons in the fruit stores.
Nevertheless, genetically of GMO food are unstable.
>> Nevertheless, the genes of GMO food are unstable.
It is means, we are not easy to prevent when this foods catch an infectious disease.
>> It means, we can't easily prevent when these food catch an infectious disease.
Because, the genetically of GMO food are mostly the same.
>> Because, the the genes of GMO food are mostly the same.

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