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I think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers. The person that take lessons is student, we know what we need and what is difficult for we. If we evaluate our teacher, we can say what we want to change.

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Hello, Henry! Students' perspectives are invaluable in improving teaching methods and fostering better learning environments. It's essential for us to have a voice in shaping our educational experiences.
Good job! ^^
~ Teacher Maxine 

I think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers. 
>>  CORRECT

The person that take lessons is student, we know what we need and what is difficult for we. 
>> The person who takes lessons is a student; we know what we need and what is difficult for us.

If we evaluate our teacher, we can say what we want to change.
>> CORRECT
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